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has been posting erroneous and incorrect grammar and/or spelling mistakes.  This auto-bot has caught several errors:


Jim and all,

  Of course your are quite right here by in large Jim. 
INCORRECT SPELLING OF "you".  CORRECTED : Of course you are quite right here by in large Jim.
 It is only very recently that ICANN is becoming aware that they have been wrong in a number of DNS related areas under discussion and debate for some time.
FOLLOWING SENTENCE MAKES NO SENCE:
Many of us that have been around for awhile [MISSING WORD?] that ICANN was an outgrowth
of the failed IAHC and gTLD-MoU efforts [WHAT????] that the DOC/NTIA shut down,
and quite correctly so as well.  
 
THE FOLLOWING SENTENCE CONTAINS 5 (FIVE) USES OF THE WORD “and”.  RUN-ON SENTENCE.
Yet many of the now ICANN staff and BOD were self appointed leaders in those failed efforts and tried to carry forward their technical and political ideology to what is now ICANN in DNS and IP related issues and technical protocol areas or aspects.


THIS SENTENCE CONTAINS GRAMATICAL PROBLEMS:
Now that the Homeland security department has been under consideration
and yesterday was passed by the senate of the US, ICANN is under
indirect advisement that they [MISSING VERB] better get their ducks in a row or bail.
 
MIXED METAPHOR
 
OVERALL GRADE : THIS WRITING IS AT A GRADE 8 LEVEL.  C-






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