Re: [atlarge-discuss] For Immediate Release

["jv" <jveillo@bellsouth.net>]

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From: "Paul" <notmyopinion@btinternet.com>
To: <atlarge-discuss@lists.fitug.de>
Cc: <eric@hi-tek.com>
Sent: Sunday, July 07, 2002 7:16 AM
Subject: Re: [atlarge-discuss] For Immediate Release


> Good idea.
> 
> You'd need something with a similarly non-official claim,
> yet stronger sounding than "group calling itself ATLARGE".
> 
> Maybe foremost blah blah blah "group representing the
> ordinary users of the internet", or "the users of the
> internet at large" or some such?
> 
> Just a thought.
> 
> Otherwise, not bad.
> 
> If you're doing anything like a press release, you need
> the basic story in the first para or two, and then a
> few optional paragraphs (with background, details, names,
> etc) that lazy (or overworked) editors can keep or bin,
> depending on how many inches they need to fill.
> 
> You could have a couple of one or two sentence examples of some
> of the worst recent abuses. Ones that members of the public
> would intuitively agree are unjust or out of order.
> 
> 
> eric@hi-tek.com wrote:
>  > Certainly just a thought;
>  > News flash!
>  >
>  > The foremost developing international representative
>   > roup calling itself ATLARGE.com is preparing for true
>   > democratic elections of their leaders.
>  >
>  > "ATLARGE" is a group...
>   > The group is fighting and scrounging...
> 
> [don't like scrounging in this context]
> 
>  > ...for human resources to help create a model
>   > for universal voting and a voice for common users
>   > of the Internet....
> 
> ...
> 
>  >
>  > ps. I ain't no proof reader so beat me and the above up.
>   > But keep the splash.
> 
> Consider youself beaten up ;-)
> 
> 
> Paul
> 
> 
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