Re: [atlarge-discuss] For Immediate Release

[eric@hi-tek.com]

Ok,

I will rewrite it tonight so get your thoughts in.

We will take out the scrounging and add a news tidbit, that is devilish.
Should we put in some links?
Maybe Joe's picture of Ester or a crippled child, those are always good for
mileage. ;>}
Seriously we really must take on this issue and it is not always straight
up. Sorry.
Eric the mercenary marketeer.

jv wrote:

> ----- Original Message -----
> From: "Paul" <notmyopinion@btinternet.com>
> To: <atlarge-discuss@lists.fitug.de>
> Cc: <eric@hi-tek.com>
> Sent: Sunday, July 07, 2002 7:16 AM
> Subject: Re: [atlarge-discuss] For Immediate Release
>
> > Good idea.
> >
> > You'd need something with a similarly non-official claim,
> > yet stronger sounding than "group calling itself ATLARGE".
> >
> > Maybe foremost blah blah blah "group representing the
> > ordinary users of the internet", or "the users of the
> > internet at large" or some such?
> >
> > Just a thought.
> >
> > Otherwise, not bad.
> >
> > If you're doing anything like a press release, you need
> > the basic story in the first para or two, and then a
> > few optional paragraphs (with background, details, names,
> > etc) that lazy (or overworked) editors can keep or bin,
> > depending on how many inches they need to fill.
> >
> > You could have a couple of one or two sentence examples of some
> > of the worst recent abuses. Ones that members of the public
> > would intuitively agree are unjust or out of order.
> >
> >
> > eric@hi-tek.com wrote:
> >  > Certainly just a thought;
> >  > News flash!
> >  >
> >  > The foremost developing international representative
> >   > roup calling itself ATLARGE.com is preparing for true
> >   > democratic elections of their leaders.
> >  >
> >  > "ATLARGE" is a group...
> >   > The group is fighting and scrounging...
> >
> > [don't like scrounging in this context]
> >
> >  > ...for human resources to help create a model
> >   > for universal voting and a voice for common users
> >   > of the Internet....
> >
> > ...
> >
> >  >
> >  > ps. I ain't no proof reader so beat me and the above up.
> >   > But keep the splash.
> >
> > Consider youself beaten up ;-)
> >
> >
> > Paul
> >
> >
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